[critique] Re: The Passenger

[Martin Julian DeMello <mdemello@xxxxxxxxxxxx>]

Also sprach Boyd & Michelle Bottorff...
> > For the past several days the Muse has had me by the scruff of the
> > neck, shaking me mercilessly till this took more or less this form.
> > Comments, please, whatever you can say.
> > 
> > The Passenger
> > Words and music (c) 2001 Mark A. Mandel
> 
> I always feel guilty when all I can say is that I really liked it.  I
> feel that I'm falling down on my job as a critiquer.  :(

Me too, especially since I know that anyone posting here *wants* to be
criticised. Nonetheless, like Michelle, all I can say about this one is that
I really liked it. (Are there any bits you're unhappy with? Or is it just
one of those 'looks good but I can't tell' cases?)

m.