[critique] Re: The Passenger

[mbottorff@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx (Boyd & Michelle Bottorff)]

> For the past several days the Muse has had me by the scruff of the
> neck, shaking me mercilessly till this took more or less this form.
> Comments, please, whatever you can say.
> 
> The Passenger
> Words and music (c) 2001 Mark A. Mandel

I always feel guilty when all I can say is that I really liked it.  I
feel that I'm falling down on my job as a critiquer.  :(

Lady Lavender
Michelle Bottorff