[critique] Re: RFC: The Smile in Your Eyes

[Sean Cleary <SCleary@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>]

It is wonderful
It is short.
(send it to Hallmark?? For a card??)
Sean

	-----Original Message-----
	From:	Dave Weingart [SMTP:phydeaux@liii.com]
	Sent:	Wednesday, April 11, 2001 20:22
	To:	critique@filknet.org
	Subject:	[critique] RFC:  The Smile in Your Eyes

	This worked itself out of my head today, still undergoing a few
changes
	here and there.  I know which parts I think need work, but I'd
like to hear
	what other people say.

	*****

	THE SMILE IN YOUR EYES

	Words & Music © 2001 David Weingart

	Once lover, now a friend at heart
	You've given me a second start
	     I can't regret it, and I won't apologize
	     And I will not forget it, the smile in your eyes

	What is it here that makes you scared?
	You wonder why it is I care
	     Don't ever doubt it while the sun is in the sky
	     I can read all about it in the smile in your eyes

	        I don't stop to wonder what connects us, you and me
	        No more than the thunder can distract the rolling sea
	        Still there's something special which I can't and don't
deny
	        I feel it in the laughter and the smile in your eyes

	You stand there silent and amazed
	And understand me when I say
	    That a friend who will hold you is a gem beyond all price
	    For the things they have told you and the smile in their
eyes

	--
	73 de Dave Weingart  KA2ESK     "They reached for tomorrow, but
tomorrow's
	mailto:phydeaux@liii.com         more of the same.  They reached
for
	http://www.liii.com/~phydeaux    tomorrow, but tomorrow never
came."
	ICQ 57055207                             -- Berlin, "Masquerade"