[critique] Filk: Dabo Girl

["Qe'van" <qevan@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>]

Filk: "Dabo Girl" 
Orig: "The Wanderer"  (Dion)
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Ooooooo, I'm the type 'a gal Who likes to sleep around.
I'm never in one bed and I'm game for wall or ground!
And if I find myself falling for some guy
I pack my stuff in seconds flat 
And out the door I fly
They call me a Dabo Girl,
Yea, I'm a Dabo Girl,
I sleep around, around, around, around, around, around, around.

O'Brien's on my left, and Sisko's on my right,
But Julien's is the one who I'll be with tonight!
And when he asks me who's the one who makes me sqirm and coo
I show him the tattoo on my butt of a heart and "Daxie-poo"
Cause I'm a Dabo Girl,
Yea, I'm a Dabo Girl,
I sleep around, around, around, around, around, around, around.

Oh, I spin that Dabo wheel,
Pick up a fella that I find there.
But when I wake when morning comes
Just like his gold-pressed latinum, I vanish right into thin air!

Ooooooo, I'm the type 'a gal Who likes to sleep around.
I'm never in one bed and I'm game for wall or ground!
And if I find myself falling for some guy
I pack my stuff in seconds flat
And out the door I fly
They call me a Dabo Girl,
Yea, I'm a Dabo Girl,
I sleep around, around, around, around, around, around, around.

'Cause I'm Dabo Girl,
Yea, I'm a Dabo Girl,
I sleep around, around, around, around, around, around, around.

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-   Qe'van the Unclothed - tlhIngan bard and Volehunter
    http://pweb.netcom.com/~qevan/
... 'If your bladder sucks, you're pissing backwards.'- Qe'van