[critique] Re: New Song: Searching for a title

[Lee Gold <leeway@xxxxxxxxxxxx>]

Gwenzilla wrote:
> 
> Does anyone have title ideas? The line with the * has given me no end of trouble, as well.

Call it "The Gloster Road Castle."  It's the heart (albeit the last line) of the chorus, which is
the only part of the song that gets repeated.

If you tell me in prose what you meant by 
"reverence in red brick for that ethical code," 
I'll have a go helping you to get it to scan
and rhyme.  Right now, I can't figure out what
it means.

--Lee