[critique] Re: New Song: Searching for a title

[Sean Cleary <SCleary@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>]

Or even won-der-ous, or maybe even for-got-ten?

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	From:	Sean Cleary [SMTP:SCleary@delmarmedical.com]
	Sent:	Monday, February 26, 2001 13:30
	To:	critique@filknet.org
	Subject:	[critique] Re: New Song: Searching for a title

	So let me see
	Et-hic-al
	Chi-val-ric
	Seems to my poor talent a match in sylables. So why not?
	My dictionary gives chiv-al-ry and eth-i-cal. So it could work.
	Sean

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		From:	Gwenzilla [SMTP:wireharp@bellsouth.net]
		Sent:	Monday, February 26, 2001 13:09
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		Subject:	[critique] Re: New Song: Searching for a
title

		Dave said...
		> Might you want to rhyme "abode" instead, something
like
	"dreams in the
		> bricks of that magic abode" 

		Well-- I really wanted to give a nod to what that kind
of
	building stands for, for me. And that would be history, the
chivalric
	code, that kind of thing. I don't know that the word 'magic'
really
	conveys what I was thinking of. The main thing I'm wanting to do
here is
	pare down the syllables so I can use 'reverence' or 'veneration'
along
	with something that will get across the knightly code of honor.
Maybe
	I'm asking for too much in this one line.

		-g