[critique] Re: New Song: Searching for a title

[Sean Cleary <SCleary@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>]

So let me see
Et-hic-al
Chi-val-ric
Seems to my poor talent a match in sylables. So why not?
My dictionary gives chiv-al-ry and eth-i-cal. So it could work.
Sean

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	From:	Gwenzilla [SMTP:wireharp@bellsouth.net]
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	Subject:	[critique] Re: New Song: Searching for a title

	Dave said...
	> Might you want to rhyme "abode" instead, something like
"dreams in the
	> bricks of that magic abode" 

	Well-- I really wanted to give a nod to what that kind of
building stands for, for me. And that would be history, the chivalric
code, that kind of thing. I don't know that the word 'magic' really
conveys what I was thinking of. The main thing I'm wanting to do here is
pare down the syllables so I can use 'reverence' or 'veneration' along
with something that will get across the knightly code of honor. Maybe
I'm asking for too much in this one line.

	-g