[critique] Re: New Song: Searching for a title

["Qe'van" <qevan@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>]

Qe'van plays "Whose line is it anyway?" with Gwenzilla

> Does anyone have title ideas? 

Gloster Ode  ?

> The line with the * has given me no end of trouble, as well.

> Reverence in red brick for that ethical code,*
> Something worth hoping for down Gloster Road,
> Insurance that wishes might really come true,
> Without this to dream upon, what will I do?

Remember, remember that red brick abode


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-   Qe'van the Unclothed - tlhIngan bard and Volehunter
    "Fulfilling fantasies since March, 2000"
... 'Putting off an easy thing makes it hard.
     Putting off a hard thing makes it impossible.'
     - George C. Lorimer