[critique] Re: REVISED SONG: Make a Wish - take two

[Eloise Beltz-Decker <eloise@xxxxxxxxx>]

On Thu, 15 Feb 2001, Lee Gold wrote:
> 
> I'll see if I can find words to make all this a bit more explicit, 
> but I want to hold it down to just one more verse if at all possible.
> I am, however, reluctant to spell everything out in boring detail.
> And even if I did, it wouldn't be enough for everyone.
> (I'm thinking of one filker I know who heard Simpson's "Ship of
> Stone" and didn't understand what it was about.)

	Just for the record, Lee, I got what you were trying to do. I 
just don't have any specific, constructive-type criticisms (other than 
making a mental note to get y'all to sing it at Consonance!), so I didn't 
pipe up.

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