[critique] Re: New Song: Ghosts

[Martin Julian DeMello <mdemello@xxxxxxxxxxxx>]

Also sprach Gwenzilla...
> I finished this up last week sometime, and I'm interested in general
> comments. The tune's an aminor trifle, but I think it moves well with the
> song. I can post it in ABC later in the week if people are interested in
> that. =)

Very nice - I can almost but notquite hear a tune.

> Close-range, my close friend is talking to me.

I don't really like the 'close-range', though it's hard to say why. It's
just jars against the 'friend'.

m.